Thursday, June 10, 2010

BREAK-UP

I've thought about this moment before
I've thought about the ways we would sever
But this, for one, is none of them.

As we stand near that same old church gate
Facing each other....with some distance
There are no flashbacks....no thoughts
We don't speak a word and remain motionless
Staring each other........

And in this inertness of the moment,
We hear the sounds that remained unnoticed
Until now.........
Like the sound of gust of wind...making
some mesmerizing animations with her hair
The sound of chirping of birds and stirring of twigs
The sound of ringing of bells and falling of leaves

And then there are the sounds......
Of separation, misery, destruction, dissolution,
The moaning and groaning of our battered hearts
But the loudest of them all....is the sound of silence.

As we stand here....sank in each other's eyes
Defeated....by the stratagem of fortunes
There are no teardrops....no emotions
We don't quiver even as the sun starts to set

And in this strangeness of the moment
The sun slowly disappears below the horizon
As the day approaches to end...welcoming the night
We yet stand still in the faintest light
Unaware....that all of it will be lost
In a second..............

And in a sudden strangeness.....
Twilight fades and dusk breaks.....
Blackening the sky....and our lives

Now, as we stand here...in the darkest of all nights
Invisible....like stars in the sunlight
There are no adieus....no goodbyes
We don't look back as we walk away

And that's how we part our ways...
FOREVER...........................

10 comments:

  1. so you finally rote.. gud 1 yaar.. very touching... you rite as if you have urself experienced such pain.. you can impress any1 with ur riting skills.. keep it up.

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  2. brilliant, kid bro!!

    just a few minor errors that crept in here and there. But, fantastic work otherwise..

    Proud a 'ya!!! :-)

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  3. Nice one Dev :) Really carries one away..

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  4. oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,

    the days turned to months
    now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .

    I am scared

    I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .

    maybe I've loss

    A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be

    You
    Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
    Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk

    two fools ,with a smile
    Let go

    rest our lives
    those two fools
    will always feel those beats of
    "our hearts "

    wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
    I Love You

    My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave

    was no one that was there to Listen

    Was always there ,to fix me

    Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth

    there was many that was there to Judge

    As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing

    as must seemed things I done ,was heartless

    dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew

    Pray ,
    You hear my Heart
    Hear my Prayer
    washed with tears

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  5. speechless....
    u r bestestest frn...<3

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  6. But the loudest of all....is the sound of silence.
    my fav lyn..

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  7. @anam .. thnx buddy..>>> :) ^.^

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  8. @om bhaiya.. @nasir
    thnk ya .. :-) :>

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  9. @shadow ...beautiful.. ! ! :) ;)

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  10. @subhadra ... n i thot u hated my blog..!! :P :D ...>>> thnx a ton ! ! big whoop ! ! :) <3

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